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But if you go to Troy, you'll never come home. I love a tacky epic, with hackneyed script, cardboard characters, absurd costumes, anomalies and general nonsense. Work Search: "Come any closer and I'll split you open," he warned. Here are contained a number of abandoned/unfinished WIPs from my drafts folder. You don't need to fear me, girl. ( all platonic!! : They'll love you, and when you're gone they'll remember you. DISCLAIMER: I don't own 'em. : Welcome to /r/FanTheories! What if Hector and Paris saw their cousin after a few years? : Achilles is bitter, the death of Patroclus has left his sorrow incomparable, and his anger scalding. You will never be lovelier than you are now. Hector confronts him and Achilles lets him go, after he sees the arriving boats. Perhaps-perhaps it is not wise to offend him. Achilles waited at the foot of the bed as Peleus walked to his wife and the new addition of the family. By the end of the month, Troy will be under the command of a Greek ruler. Achilles Achilles was all of those things and more. Don't read any further, just some A/Ns that I moved to the end. That would be a sight! A warrior weaved with divinity, goddesses sons are as beautiful and cruel as their mothers. WARNINGS: Slash, mpreg, a hint of incest. For Achilles and Briseis who slept unsoundly it was a night filled with both dreams of more pleasant times and nightmares of all the evils that may befall them. Some scenes also go to Madeline Miller, just with Athelia in it. "You wouldn't!" Hector Achilles treatment of Briseis shows a finely balanced combination of the kindness and abuse that has been suggested to be the basis for the development of that condition, where an unaccountable empathy for the captor develops in the captive. After weeping over Hectors corpse, Achilles parts with it and with Briseis too, giving her the bracelet and a half-hearted apology: If I hurt you, it wasnt what I intended.. Una drabble perfetta su una scena possibile della Achille/Briseide. Throughout the film, their relationship is defined by a series of power plays on his part that seem to have escaped most critics notice. After Troy burns, Achilles is given a chance to right his wrongs. Greece got along fine before I was born. : camelotslash-2 at qwest.net
Why did you choose this life? Never hesitate. We could use a strong arm like yours. After falling for her captor, Briseis loses any agency she may have had. I am a new writer so complements and constructive criticisms are all welcome, needed and wanted. When the tent flaps opened and Hector entered, Paris felt a momentary pang of regret quickly replaced by relief. He remembered . Filming & Production Achilles would do anything to get Patroclus back, and he will. : : this is a romantic imagination story for all the vinnie lovers (like myself heh) but i hope y'all like it!! "Do you love me?" They say you can't be killed. Had the filmmakers depicted the original relationship between Achilles and Briseis, and shown a Briseis who seems content to be with her rapist, the murderer of her husband and family, it would have probably caused an outcry; they needed to avoid that. The figure approached, lowering the instrument and reaching out his hand, eyes glinting mischievously despite the absence of light. The Gods envy us. What if Achilles caught the arrowand he survived? You killed Apollo's priests! If you've been gripped by Pat Barker's The Women of Troy and The Silence of the Girls, then For the Most Beautiful is a must-read for you . The lead up to the Trojan war and the aftermath that ensues. That is more than can be said for anyone else in Troy.. I should not do this. After Troy burns, Achilles is given a chance to right his wrongs. She gives an ambiguous answer showing spirit: Should I be? Some mutual staring follows to indicate the first stages of falling in love. : Agamemnon we are the ones you left behind or// the trail of women the heroes of Troy leave in their wake. All his life, Hector had lived by a code, and the code was simple: honour his inherited craft, love his woman, and defend the reputation of his coffee. As Briseis fear and hatred gradually turn into passionate attraction and emotional surrender, and her tormentor softens towards her, this is surely in line with the development of a Stockholm syndrome-type relationship. Paris' pleasure came primarily in pleasing his lover. Briseis. How will he manage to escape from this madness? : Fighting to protect her son and her mental health Briseis embarks on a journey to find peace for herself and her son. I know that feeling well.". - You fought well today. Cousin, I can't fight the Trojans if I'm concerned for you, guard the ship! With no side coming victorious after countless battles in Troy, Agamemnon and Priam make an agreement. He wants to be remembered. To the flank! Something they don't teach you in your temple. It is the humiliation of losing these visible signs of his honour that Achilles reacts to as much as a sense of personal loss. : The new addition of east high sends a frenzy throughout the school. We have no choice.". She follow the rules. Achilles She only knew things were going downhill from there. But how many wives wait at Troy's gates for husbands they'll never see again? When Briseis is taken by Agamemnon, Achilles springs to her defence, but she insists she will not have any men dying for her. What do you want here in Troy? *** MATURE CONTENT 18+ MATURE RATED : He killed my cousin. Perhaps the kings were too far behind to see, the soldiers won the battle. Nothing was right anymore in Achilles Swan's life. Angst. Achilles Achilles Elpis was saved as a baby by the gods to be a great warrior of Troy. : No one will stop you. Achilles : You are free. : Achilles would do anything to get Patroclus back, and he will. I'll miss the start as long as I'm here at the end. When the evil Warstar aliens attack Earth, the supernatural guardian Gosei, assigned to protect the Earth by Zordon, and his faithful robot assistant Tensou recruit six "I've never seen anything quite like you, you're different Felicity Evans." Briseis resists, abusing him some more. And Greece will remain Greece long after I am gone. We will meet again, my brother. VALENTINE HERNANDEZ has been living a lie. But I'm ready. "I'm not sure if that's a compliment, but thanks." The right time to strike. : First you need the victory. He had pushed back the covers and revealed burnished sinews accented by a few whitened scars. Achilles Achilles Not soldiers! I know more about the gods than your priests. Paris, confined in Achilles' tent, marveled at the strength and determination of the infant, who, when he wasn't eating or sleeping, seemed to be willing to wail without end. So many families had a nearly same problem but in media there is so little info about this syndromebut whythey must say to all woman about this and tell them to stop hiding captors, they must ask someone for help. PAIRING: Paris / Achilles
I just realised that Cazz reviewed Troy for The F-Word in 2004: http://www.thefword.org.uk/reviews/2004/07/troy. What's your name? : How did you get in here? : A true war story about the Trojan War/ or The Iliad through the ages. Achilles Tomorrow, we'll have our war. : or perhaps love. Achilles Achilles finds his mother, Thetis, standing in the surf. "And yet I do nothing. Achilles, in Greek mythology, son of the mortal Peleus, king of the Myrmidons, and the Nereid, or sea nymph, Thetis. Sounds to me as though this film is another male-centric propaganda one wherein Briseis is depicted from the male-centric perspective as a stereotypical female masochist who submits to the ultra masculine Achilles sexual attentions meaning of course Achilles the rapist who subdues the rebellious Briseis! As she rushes through the palace trying to save her family, she thinks of Achilles and finds her heart is torn in two for her home and for the man she loves. They belong to Homer, to Warner Brothers, to the respective actors of the movie "Troy" -- and to the ages! Are you listening? Achilles' tone was gently mocking, his blue eyes sparkling from the reflection of the brazier. Apollo sees everything! The gods envy us. "Get out of that bed, Brother," Hector said, "and get the babe. If I hurt you, it's not what I wanted. : : Briseis Achilles That was his name. : I feel that the film is open to the charges of a romanticised depiction of Stockholm syndrome and of titillating the audience with the hint of rape between captor and captive. "With one shout I could bring about your capture and your death," Achilles said, stretching out his hands to either side, palms upward. Official Sites Achilles Achilles Eudorus However, it seems to me that the filmmakers exploited the idea of the love affair between captor and captive or a potential rapist and victim to excite its audience, confident that the majority would find it acceptable providing it was done with sufficient taste and apparently genuflecting to feminist sensibilities. Thetis Meanwhile, outside academia, many women continue to be enchanted by the romantic relationship between the Briseis character as played by Rose Byrne and Achilles as played by Brad Pitt (who allegedly spent six months body building to approximate the physique of a Greek god). Achilles Thetis [walks forward, lifts Priam] But if you don't release her, you'll never see home again. Anyway (TL;DR), this might be a weak theory, but the main point is, that Achilles knew he was mortal now and made decisions because of that, not his feud with Agamemnon. : Do it. [poking head through door flaps] "bCkjuqbb(bbbbbAqujkCqujk4yvroz.--/4xk|kxyk./4puot.--/bb(bCkjuq(bAqujkCqujk"+
Work Search: The city of Troy is falling to the Greek army, and Briseis must find a way out before it is too late. PLE AchillesxOC : : : Something they don't teach you in your temple. : The words hurt her]. While we've done our best to make the core functionality of this site accessible without javascript, it will work better with it enabled. But even enemies can show respect. Achilles Have you no other weapon that might pierce me?" What if they fall inlove with each other? : "I will always love you. Would you leave this all behind? : You're the only Trojan who can say that. And a passing goodbye. Victoria Smith had always been a shy girl, as no one really cared about her. What if they fall inlove with each other SEQUEL TO DUPLICITY. He wants to be remembered. : Thetis Privacy Policy. Boxing au where Patroclus is killed in a match against Hector, Achilles tries to work out his feelings about the situation. Everything is more beautiful because we're doomed. Am I still your captive? She knew what she had to do. Achilles, the greatest warrior who ever lived, died at the hands of Paris at the battle of Troy, his legend cemented in what would be known as the greatest wars ever waged. "Be still, my brave boy," he said. Maybe Spock can figure out his quickly forming love triangle while Achilles figures out his. and our To fight back when I'm attacked? tip: "uchiha sasuke/uzumaki naruto" angst kudos>10, Choose Not To Use Archive Warnings, No Archive Warnings Apply, Graphic Depictions Of Violence, Major Character Death, Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings (6), The Song of Achilles - Madeline Miller (7), Achilles (Ancient Greek Religion & Lore) (4), Achilles/Deidamia of Skyros (Ancient Greek Religion & Lore) (3), Achilles/Iphigenia (Ancient Greek Religion & Lore) (3), Achilles/Briseis/Patroclus (Song of Achilles) (2), Achilles & Briseis & Patroclus (Song of Achilles) (1), References to Ancient Greek Religion & Lore (3), Alternate Universe - Coffee Shops & Cafs, Everything is Beautiful and Nothing Hurts, Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings, References to Ancient Greek Religion & Lore, Love & Combat: The Story of Achilles & Zarina, | Oenone (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), | Andromache (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), | Helen of Troy (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), | Achilles (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), | Patroklos | Patroclus (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), War in Cambodia sometime in the Medieval Period, | Apollo (Hellenistic Religion & Lore), The Daughter of Peleus, Best of the Achaeans, Last Confessions and Testament of Briseis, | Briseis | | Hippodameia (Hellenistic Religion & Lore). "We don't have much time before morning and he has the advantage. For Aedia and Patroclus, their story would be told through the ages for thousands of years". . Even if your cousin doesn't come, I hope you'll join us, Patroclus. ew tales are told of Hades, whose very name inspires fear and penitence, reminding us of the inevitable fate which we all share. Achilles You will never be lovelier than you are now. No slash. : Cookie Notice : : Now you know who you're fighting. : Hector, however, stared for a different reason, seeming more interested in the fact his brother's normal form had been restored. Achilles Then Achilles is shown as defending his captive from Agamemnon, who looks like a superannuated Hells Angel, and his equally unpleasant troops. I'll make a pact with you. : : Odysseus : : You lost your cousin, and now you have taken mine. Perhaps the cruelest trick of all was introducing her to the world you welcomed them into your gates, unknowning to the types of people you were allowing inside. Outside the tent Paris heard men calling to one another and laughing, ready to build their fires and exhort the camp followers to prepare their evening meals. It is a terrible idea, born of anger and hurt. : Of course. If I hurt you, it's not what I wanted. The Galerii madness runs deep in her family, and Claudius is no exception. In fact there is not much difference between him and Agamemnon. Odysseus And you know this, mother? Agamemnon : "y4kjuqCkjuqA(qujkC(b/--.toup4/.kyxk|kx4/--.zorvy4kjuqCkjuqAbb(bqujkCbb(bbb"+
Achilles was a hero of the Trojan War. Is there no one else? Patroclus Umm it is morning. Her espousal of the female values of peace and faith in the gods is depicted as ineffectual against male violence, while her emotional involvement with Achilles is masochistic and self-destructive. For years, everything has been fake. The best of all the Trojans. Will he take advantage of her? Kings did not kneel to Achilles. Accordingly, the scenes where Achilles is shown as a potential rapist, apparently naked and jeering before his captive, are juxtaposed with ones in which he is portrayed as Briseis rescuer from gang-rape at the hands of Agamemnons soldiers (while the relationship between him and Briseis is depicted as being based on consensual sex and romantic love). "You are yourself again," he said. Achilles' asked unexpectedly when he stretched out beside the Trojan prince. It was me. Patroclus and Achilles were best friends as children, but when they got to high school they drifted apart. I think he's talking about himself, he's envying men that are mortal. Briseis Priam They used their children, their legacies, as playthings, and that couldnt be clearer when Ariana was sent to Westover Hall. Paris struggled over an answer for a moment, before choosing honesty. The only Master left has been sent to a new Singularity with a few Servants, and Doctor Roman's not so sure that they'll make it back. Briseis reflects on her complicated feelings towards Achilles. My lord, Agamemnon requests your presence. Part of the problem is that in the Iliad hero doesnt mean good guy per se. Sometimes I did laugh out loud. by Mr.Loda8. Do it. It's yours! The sun god will have his vengeance. Achilles Thousands of years after his death, another war rages, a conflict between the children of Corvinus, the Vampires and the Lycans. 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